Libby's poem and creative writing

WALT : write a poem using rhyming words and share it in a creative way.

Success Criteria :

• Rhyming words
• Rhythm (what does it sound like when you say it?)
• Detailed sentences (add interesting words)
• Quality illustration (A4 with jovis)
• Clear speaking voice using Chatterpics (practise at least 4 times before you record)

Libby Poem and Creative Writing

Instructional writing sample

WALT: write instructions

Success Criteria :

• Title
• Goal
• List the materials and equipment
• Steps in order
• Action verbs

How to make popcorn.

To make popcorn.

Materials:

·      Glue stick

·      Popcorn kernels

·      Popcorn maker

·      Bowl

·      Paper template

·      Scissors

Steps

   1.    Carefully cut around the template and fold neatly and glue the tabs down. This is to hold your popcorn.

   2.    Pour a cup of popcorn kernels in to the popcorn maker.

   3.    Plug the popcorn maker in very tight.

   4.    Wait for the popcorn to pop.

   5.    Share the yummy white popcorn around and you have made some yummy popcorn to eat also put the popcorn into your popcorn cup.

By Libby 


Very good writing Libby, you have met the success criteria.  Re-read your work to make sure all the sentences make sense. 

Instructional writing

WALT: write instructions

Success Criteria :

• Title
• Goal
• List the materials and equipment
• Steps in order
• Action verbs

 Libby has achieved the success criteria set out for this task.  It is evident that she has all the aspects in her writing. She has even proofread her work to then add some descriptive words! Good thinking Libby.  However, seeing as this was a publishing task she had to edit all her work along with the feedback from the teacher before she published therefor is would have been neat and without any mistakes.

You still did a great job Libby.