ANZAC Writing 2016

WALT is to writ a ANZAC narrative

I learned to do more punctuation so the sentences aren't to long and use more adjectives.

I achieved my goal because I used more adjectives to described my story and make it interesting.

Next time I will make my story interesting so the reader wants to read on.

I held my breath and helped my friend up of the ground.
I grabbed my silver gun and jumped into the disgusting water making a big splash.
I climbed the cliff and built a new trench because my old one got ruined from the poison gas.

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